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Back Yard

Back Yard

Photography Photography \ Nature | 08/17/07 @979 | Balhifet | Comments critiques (17) | Views views (388)


Back Yard
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My Back yard In Croatia.
Grass, stone walls and snakes

Canon 400D
Adobe Lightroom
 
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Avatar UE-Skateman

 08/17/07 @015

Great idea, love the separation of the dark and light through the frame of the door. Nice grass flowing. Fabulous idea, excecution however leaves a lot to be desired. The focus on this shot really couldve been alot sharper, i'm not really feelin the soft blur goin on right now, keep it up though
 
Avatar Madanapale

 08/17/07 @105

Nice idea and composition!.....A little more dof would be nice in order to see the stones also in focus.
Carlos
 
Avatar crosscheck311

 08/17/07 @187

agree with the above comments also i wish there was a more inviting sky, maybe reshoot when its a nice clear blue sky? still great idea and looks like a beautiful place. 7/8
 
zelousangel

 08/17/07 @254

great photograph!! I like how the door frames the mountain!! i agree about sharpness and focus... you also should darken the mountain if possible so that it could be seen better!!

great photograph!!
 
Avatar moserArtist

 08/17/07 @278

I am not sure that another "blue" sky is the answer for success here.

I think the main issue is the focus.
 
Avatar ceogar

 08/17/07 @347

I would have seen it cropped at the little gate, giving it a more mustique touch.
 
Avatar blackshad

 08/17/07 @543

excellent shot, some problems have been mentionned, i agree
maybe try a black and white version with high contrast? might be more interesting?
good work +8
 
Avatar trevorm

 08/17/07 @609

Agreed about the focus, but I love the concept and mood. I'd try to add more contrast -- especially to those clouds -- to make the photo more dramatic. I also like the muted colours. I'd love to see this reshot with more DOF.
 
Avatar klaredelune

 08/17/07 @727

Agreed with trevorm. A greater DOF would make this a perfect shot. I'd also like to see more cloud definition, but, well, you can't always control the clouds.
 
Avatar Poohblah

 08/17/07 @728

Not quite sharp enough, but an interesting play with the sky.
 
Balhifet

 08/17/07 @779

The thing with this one is that the focus was on the grass. The shutter speed was a little bit longer so that i would get the wavy blurred grass effect but i didn't take the wall into consideration getting an all round slightly out of focus photo. still i love the dark sky so i had to post it.

Thanks for all the C&C
 
Avatar Daykan

 08/17/07 @830

Nice composition!
Please, post just one work by day, we have a limit of 6 by month and many people just see and vote only one when you upload many in same day. Thanks!
 
Avatar dakoo

 08/17/07 @882

Firstly a very good shot indeed !! The light & composition are really awesome !!

Ok now i get why U didn't focus on the wall... Still a bit of sharpening can still be done using the below technique by

Try this tutorial by Slapo for sharpening http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=q0nDut1h0Pc
OR
GIMP tutorials

Also some level adjustment can really fix this shot !!
Have a look at my try... though i used the normal unsharp mask....

 
Avatar Lenn0

 08/18/07 @577

i like the lightning and the mood very much! but I agree on sharpening the wall...

still a very good picture!
 
Balhifet

 08/18/07 @808

wonderful tip there dakoo.. I think i just didn't give it enough time in post production to be honest im sure there is more i could have done since it was a RAW file. Thx on the help much appreciated.
 
Avatar FAV

 08/19/07 @299

Nice shot
could be sharper
 
Avatar oldskool87

 08/19/07 @945

nice shot... nice work dakoo :)
 
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